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Jack Caldwell

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Comments for Variations
« on: February 09, 2011, 06:32:10 AM »
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MegLiz05

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Re: Comments for Variations
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2011, 10:44:05 PM »
I loved all three variations!!!  I read P&P first but definitely plan on reading the rest - maybe you should see about having the short variations published as a collection, I would definitely buy it! 
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MegLiz05

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« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2011, 11:55:41 PM »
Love this one!!!!  I especially appreciate the dig at the Twilight series with the sparkling reference ;D 
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TEB

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Re: Comments for Variations
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2011, 08:10:17 AM »
On Variation #3:
This was good.  I liked that Darcy jumped back on his horse like a knight in shining armor - ha!  Did Elizabeth surprised herself when she told him that she loved him, we do often have a tendency to speak out before we think.
I wonder what came from Caroline when she realized her plan to keep her brother away from Miss Bennet failed.  
Great writing Jack.  Bravo!
« Last Edit: February 18, 2011, 08:14:45 AM by TEB »
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TEB

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Re: Comments for Variations
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2011, 08:12:39 AM »
On Variation #2:
Well, that was most definitely a bit of fluff.  :D
Writing was good, as usual.
« Last Edit: February 18, 2011, 08:15:17 AM by TEB »
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TEB

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Re: Comments for Variations
« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2011, 08:17:42 AM »
On Variation #1:
I often find I like reading JAFF when Lydia is not caught up in Wickhams snare by her own giddyness to want to be grown up and feeling wanted.
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marissa77

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Re: Comments for Variations
« Reply #6 on: June 13, 2011, 03:48:48 AM »
I just got 5 words to say.. read, read, read, read and read for you to know. :)
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